Developmental Editing and Story Strategy Services

Your novel deserves to captivate readers and catch the eye of agents and publishers. I’ll help you strengthen its structure, deepen your characters, and sharpen your style so your story is ready for the next step in its journey — and so that you can overcome those hurdles keeping you from moving forward.

Developmental Editing

Finished a draft but not sure what’s working — or what to fix next?

I can help! I bring 25 years of experience writing, workshopping, and studying craft to my review of your novel. Through in-depth developmental editing, I’ll give you clear, actionable feedback to strengthen:

  • Structure and Pacing: You're hitting the right beats and mapping to classic story structures.

  • Character and Motivation: Your characters are psychologically rich, interesting, and clear on their wants and drive.

  • Tension and Causality: You're building tension scene by scene and making the reader want to know more.

  • POV and Style: You have the right POV for your novel, and your writing style is aligned, strong, and fitting of your narrator.

  • Setting and World-Building: Your characters exist in a world that's as much a part of the plot as they are.

Genres I Specialize In

Literary fiction, upmarket fiction, book club fiction, historical fiction, and select speculative fiction.

What You’ll Receive

Two read-throughs: I give your novel two read-throughs (first to understand the full arc, second to review the craft elements), making in-document notes as I go.

Editorial letter: I write an editorial letter giving actionable feedback on the above craft elements to give you a roadmap for your next revision.

Zoom follow-up: After you’ve received your feedback, I offer a Zoom follow-up to go through the feedback further or answer any questions.

Rate

$.02 per word $.015 per word introductory rate for a limited number of projects.

Manuscript Options

Taking on full manuscripts, but also offering 50 pages development editing as well.

Timeline

Turn-around time is typically two weeks.

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“Jessica was fantastic. She read my novel and within a week provided me with an editorial letter that pointed out strengths and weakness of the work, suggestions where elements could be eliminated or combined, and other actionable feedback that I found to be invaluable. Quick, detailed, and passionate. Would strongly recommend her to anyone here!"

Recent Projects Include…

  • Historical fiction (developmental editing)

  • Historical/magical realism (developmental editing)

  • Speculative fiction (developmental editing)

  • Literary fiction (developmental editing)

  • YA novel (developmental editing)

  • Historical fiction (developmental editing)

  • Contemporary fiction (beta read and feedback letter)

  • Literary/upmarket novel (developmental editing)

  • YA novel (beta read and feedback letter)

  • Experimental novel (developmental editing)

  • Romance novel (developmental editing)

  • Commercial fiction novel (copy editing)

Story Strategy for Novelists

Stuck in your novel? Not sure how to move forward?

Sometimes you need a creative partner to help you think through how to structure your story, sharpen your ideas, or get unstuck from a half-completed draft.

In this one hour, one-on-one session, we’ll dig into your novel’s big-picture elements, including structure, character, pacing, POV, and scene succession. We’ll brainstorm, test ideas, and challenge your story assumptions, helping you see your story’s possibilities clearly and giving you confidence for the next draft.

Perfect for:

  • Writers with partial drafts or outlines

  • Authors starting a new project

  • Anyone who feels “stuck” and needs an expert sparring partner

How It Works

I send you a pre-session questionnaire to get to know you, your work, and your biggest challenges. We’ll book a one hour Zoom meeting where we’ll wrestle out answers and guidance to your biggest challenges. After, I’ll provide a post-session summary email with bullet takeaways, next-step questions, or suggested craft readings.

Rate

$150 per session.

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Hi! I’m Jessica A. Kent

I’ve been writing and studying fiction craft for 25 years. My BFA in Creative Writing from Emerson College laid the foundation of my writing craft knowledge and how to critique others' work. My MA in Literature from Harvard helped deepen my understanding as I studied and parsed great literature.

I’ve also read for literary magazines and even founded one myself, which gave me a deep understanding of what makes a submission stand out . . . and what causes a good story to fall short. That perspective informs how I approach editing: with both the writer’s intent and the reader’s experience in mind.

In the year-long Novel Incubator program, I helped nine other classmates develop their novels into publication-ready work. I've helped many writers develop and refine their drafts, several of which went on to publication, and I've also applied everything I've learned to my own fiction writing.

Finally, I’ve also applied all of this knowledge to the literature classes I now run, as I guide participants through understanding how texts were built, and how authors used various literary elements to tell their story.

A little bit more about me:

I’m the founder and director of Literary Boston, a website that covers the local literary community, and other past literary roles include library assistant, bookseller, and book festival director. I hold a BFA in Creative Writing from Emerson and a Master’s in Literature from Harvard, where my thesis on Moby-Dick and Calvinism won the Director’s Prize. My short fiction has appeared the North American Review, the Emerson Review, and others, and has received the Leah Lovenheim Award for Short Fiction. I recently graduated from GrubStreet's Novel Incubator program, where I’m working on a novel about paramedics in 1970s Boston.

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Not sure which service is right for you? That’s okay — many writers aren’t sure what kind of feedback they need yet. Fill out the form and tell me where you are in your process, and I’ll help you figure out the best next step.